The Circle in My Opinion
In our last english lesson we talked about The Circle. In my opinion The Circle is a project with good and bad sides. On the one hand side it is useful because you are connected all over the world, for example with Eamon you control and watch your home from wherever you are by webcams which show you live pictures of the place where you installed them. Demoxie offers people the chance to participate easier in politics such as elections.That's why more people will cast their votes.
But on the other hand side I think that The Circle has also disadvantages. It holds dangers such as cyber crime. The above mentioned cameras can be used to spy on someone such as your wife and children. A computer freak can hack Demoxie and forge the election results.
To cut a long story short I wouldn't recommend The Circle in reality because the dangers by far outweigh the advantages.
I think your post is clever and well written. It could be a bit longer and your english is´nt like the english of an native english speaker.
AntwortenLöschenYour English isn't good aswell!!!!!
LöschenA really nice post with some really good sentences like "to cut a long story short".
AntwortenLöschenYour post was easy to understand and well structured.
Well written, nice English("to cut a long story short"), good arguments. All in all very good.
AntwortenLöschenvery nice entry. I personally think, that you could use even more Pictures so other people know better what the bog is about.
AntwortenLöschenkeep up the good work :)
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